Sunday, July 5, 2015

Asror Allayarov writes

MY LOVE

Oh, my love--
You died at birth!
Today
Involuntarily
I buried you
Without coffin
Without shroud
As a child
However, not one, but two graves...


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3 comments:

  1. This is a very touching vignette. It lacks poetic floweration but strikes like a sledgehammer to the heart.

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  2. Some of the most powerful poems are the shortest ones

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    1. Indeed. Long poems have dissipated most of their power for contemporary readers. Not so long ago Edgar Allan Poe insisted that poems should not be over 100 lines (though he himself sometimes violated his own rule) -- most students think even that modest number is far too high!

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