Piano Optimism
Steam opens the face. Arithmetic
closes
the
eyes.
The pain in it of it a night of
dishonorable
sleep weav
-ing
nightmare with cringe and
the desire for morning to
open a gift of innumerable
qualities
Sleep Paralysis -- Diana Calabaza Cósmica
Dear Felino A Soriano,
ReplyDeleteAs one poet to another, would you be kind enough to explain the logic behind the format you chose. I don't understand the logic behind, and I would very much like to.
I also don't understand the arithmetic image and would be so, so grateful if you explained it to me. It helps me to understand the way you think.
But I like the message in the last three lines, because they sum up the essence beautifully.
Warmly,
Arlene Corwin