Interpretation
The words fell,
and I almost knew they would,
like the withered leaves of autumn,
carrying a silence within them
that looked pitifully at my face.
And that was your answer.
And I see the sun melting at the western horizon,
a grey melancholy wrapping the empty benches of the parks,
their gloom unveiled through a high pitched song sung by a blind beggar,
and a fleet of buses and cars huffing and puffing up the city roads.
I walk along
see the image of a home crumbling, receding, fading
I reach the place I live in ,
I climb the stairs, and click open the door,
- step into a void.
Empty Bench, Monterey -- Reid Woodward
Its beautifully done Mallika di. Each stanza holds a strong a flavour. Very layered and elements of the earth prominently used. Great reading it makes.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Ronald for getting into the soul of the poem
Deletegreat read,so deep in thoughts, too beautiful,one can feel the empty bench in closed eyes...
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your read n lovely comment .
DeleteLoved your poem mallika beautiful
ReplyDeleteThank u so much Sarala maasi .
DeleteBeautiful. The ‘mood ‘ of a void stirringly brought out through your words.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much vinita for reading and for your insughtful comment . Thanks much .
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