Let’s start from the smallest particle of all, the
syllable. It is the king and pin of versification, what rules and holds
together the lines, the larger forms, of a poem….
It is by their syllables that words juxtapose in
beauty, by these particles of sound as clearly as by the sense of the words
which they compose. In any given instance, because there is a choice of words,
the choice, if a man is in there, will be, spontaneously, the obedience of his
ear to the syllables. The fineness, and the practice, lie here, at the minimum
and source of speech….
It would do no harm, as an act of correction to
both prose and verse as now written, if both rime and meter, and, in the
quantity words, both sense and sound, were less in the forefront of the mind
than the syllable, if the syllable, that fine creature, were more allowed to
lead the harmony on. With this warning, to those who would try: to step back
here to this place of the elements and minims of language, is to engage speech
where it is least careless—and least logical. Listening for the syllables must
be so constant and so scrupulous, the exaction must be so complete, that the
assurance of the ear is purchased at the highest—40 hours a day—price. For from
the root out, from all over the place, the syllable comes, the figures of, the
dance…
I say the syllable, king, and that it is
spontaneous, this way: the ear, the ear which has collected, which has
listened, the ear, which is so close to the mind that it is the mind’s, that it
has the mind’s speed . . .
it is close, another way: the mind is brother to
this sister and is, because it is so close, is the drying force, the incest,
the sharpener . . .
it is from the union of the mind and the ear that
the syllable is born.
But the syllable is only the first child of the
incest of verse (always, that Egyptian thing, it produces twins!). The other
child is the LINE. And together, these two, the syllable and the line,
they make a poem, they make that thing, the—what shall we call it, the Boss of
all, the “Single Intelligence.” And the line comes (I swear it) from the
breath, from the breathing of the man who writes, at the moment that he writes,
and thus is, it is here that, the daily work, the WORK, gets in, for only he,
the man who writes, can declare, at every moment, the line its metric and its
ending—where its breathing, shall come to, termination….
Let me put it baldly. The two halves are:
the HEAD, by way of the EAR, to the SYLLABLE
the HEART, by way of the BREATH, to the LINE
the HEART, by way of the BREATH, to the LINE
And the joker? that it is in the 1st half of the
proposition that, in composing, one lets-it-rip; and that it is in the 2nd
half, surprise, it is the LINE that’s the baby that gets, as the poem is
getting made, the attention, the control, that it is right here, in the line, that
the shaping takes place, each moment of the going.
I am dogmatic, that the head shows in the syllable.
The dance of the intellect is there, among them, prose or verse. Consider the
best minds you know in this here business: where does the head show, is it not,
precise, here, in the swift currents of the syllable? can’t you tell a brain
when you see what it does, just there? It is true, what the master says he
picked up from Confusion: all the thots men are capable of can be entered on
the back of a postage stamp. So, is it not the PLAY of a mind we are after, is
not that that shows whether a mind is there at all?
And the threshing floor for the dance? Is it
anything but the LINE? And when the line has, is, a deadness, is it not a heart
which has gone lazy, is it not, suddenly, slow things, similes, say,
adjectives, or such, that we are bored by?
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