Use no superfluous word, no adjective which does not
reveal something.
Don’t use such an expression as “dim lands of peace.” It
dulls the image. It mixes an abstraction with the concrete. It comes from the
writer’s not realizing that the natural object is always the adequate symbol.
Go in fear of abstractions. Do not retell in mediocre
verse what has already been done in good prose. Don’t think any intelligent
person is going to be deceived when you try to shirk all the difficulties of
the unspeakably difficult art of good prose by chopping your composition into
line lengths.
An “Image” is that which presents an intellectual and
emotional complex in an instant of time. I use the term “complex” rather in the
technical sense employed by the newer psychologists….
It is the presentation of such a “complex”
instantaneously which gives that sense of sudden liberation; that sense of
freedom from time limits and space limits; that sense of sudden growth, which
we experience in the presence of the greatest works of art.
It is better to present one Image in a lifetime than to
produce voluminous works.
All this, however, some may consider open to debate. The
immediate necessity is to tabulate A LIST OF DON’TS for those beginning to
write verses. I can not put all of them into Mosaic negative.
To begin with, consider the three propositions (demanding
direct treatment, economy of words, and the sequence of the musical phrase),
not as dogma—never consider anything as dogma—but as the result of long
contemplation, which, even if it is some one else’s contemplation, may be worth
consideration.
Pay no attention to the criticism of men who have never
themselves written a notable work. Consider the discrepancies between the
actual writing of the Greek poets and dramatists, and the theories of the
Graeco-Roman grammarians, concocted to explain their metres.
We are up against so many mysteries. There is the problem
of benevolence, the point at which benevolence has ceased to be operative.
Eliot says that they spend their time trying to imagine systems so perfect that
nobody will have to be good. A lot of questions asked in that essay of Eliot’s
cannot be dodged, like the question of whether there need be any change from
the Dantesque scale of values or the Chaucerian scale of values. If so, how
much? People who have lost reverence have lost a great deal.
There is the mystery of the scattering, the fact that the
people who presumably understand each other are geographically scattered. A man
who fits in his milieu as Frost does, is to be considered a happy man.
Another struggle has been the struggle to keep the value
of a local and particular character, of a particular culture in this awful
maelstrom, this awful avalanche toward uniformity. The whole fight is for the
conservation of the individual soul. The enemy is the suppression of history;
against us is the bewildering propaganda and brainwash, luxury and violence.
Sixty years ago, poetry was the poor man’s art: a man off on the edge of the
wilderness, or Frémont, going off with a Greek text in his pocket. A man who
wanted the best could have it on a lonely farm. Then there was the cinema, and
now television.
The means of communication breaks down, and that of
course is what we are suffering now. We are enduring the drive to work on the
subconscious without appealing to the reason. They repeat a trade name with the
music a few times, and then repeat the music without it so that the music will
give you the name. I think of the assault. We suffer from the use of
language to conceal thought and to withhold all vital and direct answers. There
is the definite use of propaganda, forensic language, merely to conceal and
mislead.
The only chance for victory over the brainwash is the
right of every man to have his ideas judged one at a time. You never get
clarity as long as you have these package words, as long as a word is used by
twenty-five people in twenty-five different ways. That seems to me to be the
first fight, if there is going to be any intellect left.
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