Saturday, February 3, 2018

Sravani Singampalli writes



Humility
                   
‘Namaste’ is an act of humility
With humility, we gain wisdom
See humility in nature
Trees bending in the harsh wind
Just seem to me as if
They are asking for
Forgiveness on
Behalf of
All of
Us.
It
Reminds
Me of lord
Jesus Christ who
Suffered pain for our
Sins so that we all could
Be forgiven and live a
Better life, even the raging
Fire bows down to water in defeat
Showing reverence and humility!

Humility’ to me doesn’t mean low
 Unity comes with humility I believe
 Malice and conceit have to be destroyed
 In order to live a sublime life.
 Little things do matter a lot
 I believe, like saying
 Thank you, hello or hi
 You must be humble to survive!  

 (NOTE: Poetry forms used are Double Reversed Etheree and Acrostic) 

 
 Namaste -- Mollie Kellogg

1 comment:

  1. “Nama” means bow, “as” means I, “te” means you – “I bow to you.” Yoga practitioners place their hands together at the heart chakra, palms touching and fingers pointing upwards, close their eyes, and bow their head slightly as an acknowledgment of the soul in one by the soul in another. It may also be performed by placing the hands together in front of the “3rd eye” above the nose, bowing, and bringing the hands down to the heart. It is used for salutation and valediction. In India the gesture speaks for itself and is generally unspoken, but in the West the word is usually verbalized.

    Etheree Taylor Armstrong is credited with inventing the progressive syllabic verse form called an "etheree." It is a 10-line unrhymed poem; the 1st line has 1 syllable, the 2nd has 2, and so forth. Judi Van Gorder's poem, "Etheree," demonstrates its form:

    One
    subject
    to explore
    within ten lines,
    each avoiding rhyme.
    Sequential syllables,
    numbers run from one to ten
    creating a staircase of words
    for the expectant reader to climb.
    A popular verse from the internet.

    A reverse etheree has 10 syllables in the 1st line and ends with a single syllable in the 10th; a double etheree begins with 1 syllable, works its way up to 10, and then works its way back down to 1 in the 20th line.

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